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The following post is a repost from my friend Master 0 who actually first posted this on the neosoul rpg forum. He is currently working on this and have already 85% mapped out in his brain, now all he has to do is get it down on paper. I want to work on it too, I'm not technically stealin ideas coz hes my friend. And besides I can't come up with very many workable ideas on my own. I mean like ones I can actually start and finish.

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-- Edited by doomonyou at 19:28, 2004-11-13

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Remember i posted this in a forum. I still have work to do, as you can see.

PS, I still three more empires that i didn't add that will have a huge role to play in it.

Ok, Here's my baby of all my animes etc. Some folks here wanted more info when they heard about it, so now it's here with some profiles.Will be updated weekly.

Ancient is a part of a two part saga and i`m planning on a prequel to about Gio starting from when he was little studying magic for a while and saved many lives on his homeworld before he became what he is in Ancient.Plus that will also be a saga with good characters and story.by the way he won`t really be during much untill his big bother is suppose to have died and that will be a good while.

more about the organic armors; the organic armors are called ancient armors cause they fell to the planet Yanark 500 years ago which the inhabitants of the planet called it the day armors rained.That day Gio,Agony,The Angel of Darkness Ryugo,and God Mech fell to the planet aswell.The people begin studying the armors gathering their best scientists and engineers,and hired soldiers to see what powers the armors had.Once they seen how powerful the armors were military generals demanded replica`s of the armors to be made for it could be used as a tool of war.

The people begin making replica`s but the scientists,engineers and armours couldn`t understand how the armors were made organic so the replic`s where not organic but AI.The AI armors were giving to low lvl soldiers and the organic armors to high lvl soldiers,because the AI armors were not as powerful as the organic armors.The AI armors reacts with voice command and organic armors was all brain operated with brain waves between the human and the armor persona.Then people started fearing the organic armors even the generals them selfs, as for it had too much power and soldiers minds begun being taking control of by the armors cause their minds were to weak to control it,whole citys even countrys were destroyed by the evil armors while the good ones took over minds and tryed to stop them.when the soldiers finally got control of their minds they took off the armors before it could happen again.All the organic armors were then spead across Yanark by holy men and sealed off from the world never to be used again.

Oh, Yeah Organic Armors are like genetically modified armors and the AI armors use voice command for their special attacks like if the soldier want to use Twin lasers etc. they just say twin lasers in the hidden compartment opens up and fires the twin lasers. By the way when not using special attacks they use their fists, swords, Katana`s and other hand to hand combat weapon.oh and soldiers not wearing armors use guns and other projectile weapons.oh and tanks and other military eqiupment are used to.

********The main idea of this saga**********************

The first chapter of this two part saga, will be a tell of the Mihoku family as they unlock the truth about their part and the secrets of the legendary Ancient armors. And all everything in the first chapter will be unlocking the truths and secrets of the past, when the day armors rained from the sky. It will also have events leading up to the second/last part of the saga.
************************PROFILES************************

As the story moves along people will learn more about the characters with little known background and some will have a shocking past.

Zanku, age 32: Aka.Vengence is Agony`s lackey and Tachi uncle.He killed Tachi`s father cause his big sister left him to be with Tachi`s father when he was only 5.He was tortured for 3 years by the cult called Hell souls during experiments on him which is why his body is scared,He almost died in a experiment his last day of torture but Agony saved him( really he amost died a few times during experiments) and he has been with her since plotting to release the Angel of Darkness her twin bother. One experiment was Zanku fighting two lions with his bare-hands at the age of 7 which he nearly lost an eye, leaving behind three claw prints across his right eye.Oh yeah plus their plotting to kill their boss Gio. really Zanku isn`t plotting nothing as i said he`s just Agonys lackey doing whatever she tells him to.

Chaos Demon, age unknown: He also works for Gio but little is known about him he seems to know Tachi and his bother Vito.He to is in on the plot to kill Gio with Agony,as you can see she`s the one calling the shots.Chaos Demon is hard to control though cause his name sake he just like causing chaos killing anyone he like,and the thing Tachi can`t get is why a person of that nature saved his life twice and didn`t kill him like the rest of his infantry unit.

Alexis aka Alex, age 19: She is the second in command of the Seekers of Power. she was the only girl of 9 children and is a tomboy,she joined the SoP only because most of her friends joined.When ever you see Kento she is close by ready to defend him if needed, she also has a crush on Kento.

Domen, age 18: He is also a member of the SoP. he is their main cash flow and thier strats commander. they have won many battles because of him; all his opponents underestimate him cause at first sight he looks like a rich spoiled kid, but his fighting style is very deadly and can take down 5 men at one time.He never fights at his full power of fear what he might do. also he stays in a castle by his self with servents, he never knew his parents. what he don`t know is his father was the king of the dark empire but was betrayed and killed by Dea-gon the demon.also he is one of Vito`s best friends.

Vito, age 18: Tachi`s big bother who is a member of the seekers of power,he and Tachi have been at odds ever since their fathers death.He formed the seekers of power(SOP) and was the leader untill Kento challenge him for leadership in a fight,he lost and was put second in command where he lost to another challenge by Alex who want to show off in front of Kento.he then left for two months to train then came back to fight for leadership of the SOP again but lost;he then went for second in command but lost when he had Alex defeated and started to get cocky,ever since then he followed orders and didn`t challenge for leadership.after Kento and Alex got thrown in Metro Star`s prison Vito once again gained leadership,but he has his honor and he with the SOP and the help of Tachi broke them out of prison along with Tachi`s friends who were imprisoned there knowing he would lose leadership once again. During the break out he is nearly killed by Stalker one of the head guards, He later just walks out of the SOP HQ still thinking about his defects and disgusted about it, and is never seen again. BIG INFO, He returns after one year life dangering training a Badass, and is in control of the legendary ancient armor Demon Star. This armor is at one with him, for they both have a strong desire and will for power.

Dea-gon, age 125:The demon ruler of the supposeed to be defeated Dark Empire little is known about this demon.He was first a servent of the old ruler of the dark empire,he was Finos right hand soldier but he later betrayed Finos and became King.Finos was the first who tryed Gio and payed for with his life,but Dea-gon is also getting too power hungry and is waiting for the moment to strike Gio.

Blaze Demon, age unknown:Little is known about him,he works for Gio but he is loyal and will die fighting by Gio`s said. He is one of the reasons Agony is holding off her plans to kill Gio, He is a force to be dealt with. He have a secret past also.

Dexter AKA.Cyborg, age 19:He`s one of Vito`s best friends and a member of the SOP.He`s their main person keeping the Cyberian army off their backs,cause his father is the General.He got his nickname cause of his fighting style,many people fear fighting him cause it`s like fighting a Machine.He wears a pair of cool looking shades. at birth his eyesight was leaving him at a steady pace.So his father put him in a private project which put in a few cybernetic parts into his brain and behind eye nerves which made him see better then any normal human.But his eyes turned a silver color plus at night they light up silver,which is why he always wears his cool looking shades. Other secret projects was tested on him, but he doesn't know it.


Gio, age unknown: He was a hero on his home planet and also saved two other planets from eternal darkness
Gio was good but turned evil cause the people he saved kept turning on him, Plus killed his family.
after so long of being betrayed by those he tryed to help he said "What the hell they bite the hands that saved them too many times,they shall all become my underlings." plus his bother died years before his wife and children was killed and he didn't fully recover from it. His bother is the father of Agony and Ryogo, And he never told them, and he treated them special cause their the only family he got left.


Agony, age unknown: She was created in a lab with her twin bother, from Gio's bother Jin genes and a goddess the scientist also had the most powerful sorcerer on the planet to help them captor a little essence of angels that was put into both twins. she was created to be a guardian angel, while her bother was created to be a Arch Angel to help in a war that was perdicted to come. But the perdiction was a fake and the people really didn't care as long as they got to play God creating a new powerful life form. Her bother turned evil as the sorcerer wanted and started taken over the planet, Alice was her name then and she helped protect the planet trying to stop the evil from spreading. She had 4 children to but 3 of them was killed by her bother as a message to stay out of his way,she was enraged and browed to get revenge no matter what. The evil spread across half of the planet and the scientists and good sorcerers had a back up plan to stop it by releasing a cyborg called God Mech who was 14 years old. One sorcerer begged the scientists not to release the boy yet cause he was not ready for all the pain,suffering, and evil spread across the planet they did not listen. God Mech had a spell cast on him which let him sense good and evil people and feel everything that had to do with good and evil.The planet had so much pain and suffering on it that God Mech lost it and destoryed the whole planet, Alice last child was killed by God Mech and she then took on the name Agony. She and a few others manage to escape the doomed planet, then something went wrong and their spaceship was shot down sending it flying to the planet Yanark. That's why she had Lamia and Zanku cause she has her mind set on revenge and she's not strong enough to kill her bother and God Mech. Her children and grand-children now are just pawns for revenge.

Forsakens, age unknown: The forsakens are a unknown race of beings who live in the Forsaken Land, a forest whice has been covered in black fog since the day armors rained. It took on the name forsaken land after people who visited the forest was starting to disappear never to be seen again, the people gave the creatures who lived in the forest the name forsaken.The forsakens look like a mix between lions and humans with blue fur covering their bodies. They are the ones killing whoever enter the forest to keep people from snooping around and discovering Gio's Fortress whice is located in the middle of the forest, the fortress is Gio's base of command. The Dark Empire was really another part of Gio's secret plan to take over the planet, he ordered the death of the dark empires leader Finos when Finos tryed to make the empire his own and betray him.


Gaiza, age 56: Leader of a gang of bandits, little is known about this man. he have no background that people know of, though he has a 29 year old son who helps him lead the bandits on their attacks. his son is Gaiza Nucilova the 2nd.


Master Zero, age unknown: He is the legendary destroyer of the universe, that people talk tells about from generation to generaton. No one remembers where this tell came from, but it is said that the day armors rained on the Planet Yanark, It was destined that a very powerful being will be born one day, that will forever change the existist of mankind. That being will be corrupted and destroy the whole universe, and only those who follow him and be his slaves will survive. folks tell thier children and grand-children these tells to spook them at night, many consider the tell for a joke, untill he shows up in the story. He manipulates all sides to get what he needs, he mostly sits in his seat and gives out orders to the Messager. He laters get more involved by taking place in combat, he takes on Chaos Demon, Vito and Tachi all at once without using a Ancient armor and shows how powerful he really are by beating them. His Ancient armor is Abyss, a very powerful and sinister looking ancient armor.


The Messager, age unknown: He is Master Zero's right hand, he acts as a voice for Master Zero and recruits the most powerful best fighters to join Master Zero's army of super soldiers. Little is known about this person, though he helps Tachi with advice and tells Tachi about Gio and Agony , it is hard to tell rather he's a allie or an enemy. His voice puts fear into most men, he sounds like he came from the Abyss itself whice combines with his sinister looking black as midnight ancient armor. also his armor have wings extended from it's back whice he uses to stay afloat, his feet never come into contact with the ground untill later on when he fights Tachi.


********************Secret Organizations and Groups***********

The Seekers of Power is a group of young men and women in search of the Ancient armors.they are highly known by the four empires for their highly skilled combat skills with AI armors and without,most of its members will do anything to get their hands on a ancient armor. It is lead by Kento it`s best fighter,he is also the first to get a Ancient armor.


Knights of Fate: A top secret organization that was formed five years after the day armors rained, their job is to control the amount of evil spread across the planet. It was foretold by a warning carved into God Mech's star ship that if too much evil was to spread across the planet, God Mech will be released from his chronic-chamber and he will destory the whole planet to eliminate all evil by any means to stop the suffering. That is why they created the knights of fate they secretly control the whole entire fate of the planet, their means are sometimes harsh to make sure balance is kept. They will kill you without warning if you cause too much trouble. Plus God Mech's big bother came from another planet to Yanark to help form and lead the Knights.


Bandits of Gaiza: A small band of bandits who attack military, and merchant conveys for weapons and food supplys. It is heard that they give all the food to the hungry and needed, they are lead by a elderly man named Gaiza.


Hell Souls: A very secret cult that many people don't know about, they go about and do their dirty work with extreme caution, for they know the knights of fate will have spies everywhere watching for trouble. Their secretly looking for the legendary destroyer of the universe Master Zero, they kidnap little children and do experiments on them to see who's the legend that the planet was warned about that will be born. They experimented on Zanku for three years to see if he was the one, they want to get their hands on the child who will become Master Zero, to get him under their control to rule the universe.




Oh by the way, this is not vary organized info. I copied it from the game site i play on cause i didn't want to write all this stuff over. The site give me good comments on Ancient. all new info are coming from my info/stories book.

PS: How do you folks like it so far.

***********************Empires***************************

The Dark Empire: The dark empire is a empire raned by dark forces, the dark empire tryed to take over the planet 18 years ago. But it was defeated by the joined forces of all four empires, the country of Cyberia and the top secret organzation the Knights of Fate leading the way. The Leader of the empire at that time was Finos, Domen's father. The empire is believed to be no more after it's destruction, but it was rebuilt and stronger then ever with Gio ready to try and take over the world again. The dark empire has a new leader, a demonic creature named Dea-gon who Gio has put in charge of the empire.

The Draken Empire: The draken empire is one of the weakest empires, their only major defence from the other empires is the country of Cyberia who help them defend themselfs from the other empires. It's technology is not so great, that is what put them behind the other empires, They later on become one of the most powerful empires with a new General Vito/Demon Star.

Gaiyazan Empire: This is the second most powerful empire on the planet of Yanark. It has very advanced Technology, and is feared by all empires. Their battleships are almost unpenetrable due to their highly powered shields, but due to that they need a very huge amount of power supply to stay up. They was on the front lines when the huge war with the Dark Empire sparked off, they also lost many units nearly wipeing out the whole military power and the empire.

***********************Updates***************************

Agony profile has been updated with some of her secrets revealed, plus it will let ya'll know a little why it's called Ancient.

No updates for a while folks, I have a lot of stuff going on right now.

Updates coming soon: more empires info

Edited by Master 0 on Jul 12 2004, 18:17

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